Saturday, January 12, 2008

vestiges

poet wanders the page
imprint

chasing a trail through poems
fugitive ghost
phantom presences aura

what is noise in the poem
the subjective relation to others

what is important in a poem

at the edges

3 comments:

Indran Amirthanayagam said...

Jill, the poems are strong. love the chance to read one after the other as I sit in limbo after my plane had to land owing to engine trouble take care Indran (from Dubai)

Crafty Green Poet said...

I enjoyed this, I like the things that are not quite said here, and the ending is perfect.

Jill Jones said...

Hi Indran and Juliet,
Thanks for the comments!
JJ