Jill Jones takes poetry for a walk
.......on pine branches
summer shade
.......summer long
you and I
.......looser now
in this slow-
.......finishing twilight
I like this -- a minimalist, vivid 'capture.' The "looser now" line makes me want to suddenly unwind (if only I could do a pirouette, sigh). ;) Thank you for that. Cheers.
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I like this -- a minimalist, vivid 'capture.' The "looser now" line makes me want to suddenly unwind (if only I could do a pirouette, sigh). ;) Thank you for that. Cheers.
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