on - a model of a process

curves
model curves
life form proceeds
shaped
like songs
green and hungry
caught
in congress
with the process
there's
a long
long press up
unless
the hand
that feels us
picks
the bloom
for the fire
to
learn by
looking into this
white
and green
curled like comment
there
are ways
if not understood

Comments

Adam Aitken said…
Nice poem Jill!

Adam
Jill Jones said…
Thanks, Adam.

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